>>217862 I gotta say, whoever at Glitch thought to cast Dave PhantomArcade as the voice of the Absolute Solver was fucking genius. Genuinely terrifying performance without dropping the BonziBuddy voice at any time.
>Liquid’s consciousness is slowly coming back to him. His head hurts but thanks to his training and conditioning, he ignores the pain. >What happened? Where is he? He remembers that he was going to blow up a restaurant catering to the robotic slaves of the Absolute Solver, and enemies of humanity, until something struck him at the back of his head. >He doesn’t recall what happened after that. Has he been kidnapped? >Everything is blurry but from he colors around him he can tell he’s no longer outside. >Wait. He can see something move. He moves his head and sees a figure. The figure gets closer to him and his vision gets bombarded by a bright yellow light? >Liquid moves his hand up to block the light. He isn’t tied up? He pushes away the light source but someone grabs his hand and pushes it down. >He blinks a few times to try to clear his vision. Once everything doesn’t look like a smudged painting, he focuses on the person right up to his face. The light turns from a floodlight being shined at your eyes to two distinct set of yellow ovals of a drone’s visor and a glowing headband--- >THAT’S A MURDER DRONE! >Suddenly his instincts and he jumps at the Murder Drone. It yelps as you grab it by the neck and push it on the ground. You start squeezing, the polymetal strut holding it’s head bending before someone thrown him off it. >”Stop!” Someone yells out as you stand up and get ready to attack before you see something that makes you stop in place. >It’s the original. His tissue donor. The one he was cloned from. Buddy. >”Damn it! I just wanna talk!” Buddy yells as he stands between Liquid and the Murder Drone. >Liquid reaches for his knife but doesn’t find it as he pats around his hips. They took his knife and probably the other weapons. >The Murder Drone stands up and chuckles. “He’s no different from when you were young!” It says with a feminine voice. >”Danny, just shut up.” Buddy points at the Murder Drone, Danni, stops talking and he looks back at you. >Liquid look around and sees another Murder Drone with frilly hair and a dress with polka dots, who looks uncomfortable, and one of the Sentinel Drones who looks ready to fight if he does anything. He stands still but he is ready to fight if he has to. >”Look, I’m sorry for this. I just wanna ask you some questions, okay?” Buddy clears his throat. “I know that taking you away might not sit right with you but you were trying to kill innocents---” >”Innocents?” Liquid retorts back. “They’re the enemy!” >”No, no no!” Buddy waves his hands. “Not anymore! They’re friends! See?” He points at the Murder Drone who you attacked, and gives Liquid a nasty look, and at the other one. “They’re my friends. They haven’t hurt anyone---” >”That’s a lie. You know it.” Liquid retorts again which causes Buddy to stutter before the polka dot Murder Drone steps forward and gives you a nervous, but warm, smile. >”Please, just calm down. We, uh, got off the wrong path here. I think we should have introduced ourselves first.” It---no, she---claps her hands “No you have a name?” >”AAV-0001-VB.” Liquid says his serial clone number in a flat tone. The Murder Drone’s smile drops a little bit. >”Do you…do you have an actual name?” The Murder Drone says and Liquid shakes his head. “I was never given one.” >”Oh, um…” It looks at the ground as it thinks then back at him. “Well, uh, my names is Molly. You may know me from Molly’s Playhouse---” >”Impossible. The Drone known as Molly is dead. You are a copy.” He watched a few episodes of Molly’s Playhouse before and for some reason he was strangely…infatuated with the show. It’s just the way she acts is captivating to his emotions. Seeing this Murder Drone calling herself Molly feels insulting to him. >”I know, I know. I was captured by the Solver, modified and forced to do it’s bidding…” Molly’s smile falters for a moment before coming back. “But let’s not dwell on the past!” She walks over to Buddy. “This is---” >”I know who he his.” Molly looks at Buddy but he shrugs. She then walks over to the other Murder Drone. “This is Danni, Buddy’s best friend.” >”Hello.” Danni says as she waves. Liquid glares at her. Molly then walks over to the Sentinel Drone. “And this is Pavo. He’s a Sentinel Drone and also a friend.” He waves at Liquid. >”Sentinel Drone?” Liquid raises an eyebrow. “He doesn’t look like any of the variants I recognize.” >”You mean the V3 Sentinels?” Pavo speaks up. “They were phased out years ago. They were to…unstable.” >Liquid has never seen a Sentinel Drone up close before, the closest he’s ever done so is learning material back in the labs, and he read that V3 Sentinels were unstable and prone to random violence. This Pavo doesn’t seem to be like them. >Liquid looks back at Molly. “Now that we introduced each other why don’t we talk about ourselves?” Molly says as she looks at the others and they nod too. “Why don we start with you…?” She looks at Liquid, not sure what to call him. >”I am a clone of him.” Liquid points at Buddy. “Genetically perfected. Loyal to the Federation and not a traitor.” >Danni doesn’t like that and takes a step forward before being stopped by Buddy. He takes a step forward instead, walking up to Liquid. “When did they start cloning me?” >”When you were being augmented. Your genetic structure showed promising results during your augmentation. The scientists harvested it and spliced it to enhance these structures. I’m stronger and faster than you.” >”Why don’t I know about it them.” >”Secret project. Above your clearance and you would have objected.” >Buddy curses under his breath. “How many of you are roaming around?” >”None. It’s just me. I’m a prototype while they were refining clone growth technology.” >”How did you survive all this time.” Buddy crosses his arms. >”Hiding in the shadows. I lost contact with Command and I learned that nobody was coming for me. I had to adapt.” Liquid glances at Danni and Molly. “I’m following my last given objective to kill the enemies of the Federation and Humanity.” >”So you’re a terrorist?” Buddy sighs and looks at Pavo. “As if we don’t need another one.” >”Guys, please.” Molly speaks up and gets everyone’s attention. “You’re scaring him. I can see he’s scared so why don’t we just all calm down?” She turns to Liquid and gives him the warmest smile he’s seen. “Do you like pancakes with chocolate?”
>>217876 Wonder how human version of an Mutant OC would react trapped in a room with their Mutant version Or how Pauline would react to Human Abby Or how Pauline and Abby would interact both being human
>>217879 imagine snabby coiling around you and caressing you with the many many assimilated arms emerging from her slit underbelly.. she’ll probably assimilate you too but at least she’s being nice about it.
as a funny aside, my phone’s autocorrect nearly corrected “coiling” to “cooking” which gives the funny mental image of her in an apron trying desperately to remember how a spatula or frying pan is supposed to be used.
>>217917 He could just be acting like that since Terrence doesn't seem to interact much with kids his age but I guess you can't deny the homoerotic lust between those two.
>>217862 How would Boyzi react to Male!Beretta getting Femanon pregnant with twins? Would he lose it like regular Uzi, accusing Femanon of using witch charms on her son to destroy her lineage?
>>217941 I don't think Barret wouldn't mind having kids and I think he'll make a great dad when Anon, Beretta and their two kids are an actual functional family unlike Uzi and N.
>Fun Morning Rule 63 Universe Facts: Boyzzy ships Boyzi with his (Boyzzy's) mom because he hates his stepdad and thinks the idea of that autistic freak cucking him would be really funny
>>217862 Do you think Norman's gone crazy (crazier than he already was rather) from spending somethingteen years in the bowels of Cabin Fever, completely alone, with nothing to do (other than search for the patch) but marinate in guilt and shame, or do you think his "best friend" Old Boney the inanimate human skeleton really is alive? I mean, Old Boney kept moving while he and N weren't looking, and if you look closely in the epilogue you can see Old Boney hoverhanding Connie's ass...
>>217961 you're doing the scribbles thing again. don't ask for validation, keep improving, let your work speak for itself, and if anons decide you've "redeemed yourself" they'll just stop treating you as a pariah without making a big fuss over it
>>217978 >Molli doesn't know that people use dronely fans for more than just porn Molli doesn't know about all the paypigs willing to shell out money to drones willing to livestream their wires being played with
>fem!kahn telling uzi about her "mill all humans" phase >"...and then I met your stepdad!" "OHMYF---ING GOD MOM STOP TALKING ABOUT YOU AND ANONS WEIRD SEX THING!" >"It's not just sex!"
>>217956 >>217968 >The clock struck midnight. Most good little drones were fast asleep, dreaming of sugarplums. >But not Berry. >“Berry wants CANDY,” he whispered, tiptoeing across the creaky wooden floor like a gremlin with a sweet tooth. >The kitchen was dark, but Berry knew it like the back of his sticky hand. He crawled into the cabinet like a raccoon in pajamas and rifled through the snack stash. "Berry smell gummies… Berry FEAST now." >He emerged moments later, face smeared in caramel and Strawberry flavor, fingers clutching a half-open bag of jellybeans. He slunk into the shadows, giggling to himself. “Berry leaves no wrappers… Berry is sneaky candy ninja.” >He was wrong. There were wrappers everywhere. >The next day, as the sun dared to shine upon his mischief, Berry sat hunched in front of the computer. His eyes glowed with chaotic yellow. "Berry goes keyboard warrior now," he cackled, opening ten tabs and logging into forums he had absolutely no business visiting. >He sent a message to a knitting forum: “Berry says your mom tastes like old spaghetti. Berry out.” Then, he picked up his phone. It was time. “Hello sir, your pizza is here?” he said in the most serious voice he could manage. The confused voice on the other end barely had time to respond before Berry shouted: “Berry SAYS GO CATCH IT!” Click. And then he wheezed. That strange giggle-wheeze only a nuisance can master. “Berry is internet king. All hail Berry.” After tiring of digital havoc, Berry wandered the house with a new mission: "Berry test if thing break when fall." An ancient statue looked at him wrong. CRASH. “Berry was right. You're very fragile. 0/10 defense.” Epilogue: >A mob of angry people beat him to death. But he was still had the annoying smirk :3. They decided it's not worth their time. So they tied him to a tree. >The end.
>>217993 No, and just to punish you further I'd like to remind (You) and everyone else that a multi-part greentext exists where Beretta and N end up having passionate sex following the death of Uzi
>217995 I think the absolute worst thing about this anon is the fact they have no sovl, at all. Everything they do feels forced and not out of anything close to geniune.
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>>218028 This is also an excuse for me to post this band of idiots once again since this chapter is all about them and for the new faces that don't know of their existence.
>>218017 >017 God wills it, she shall feel good soon allhamdullilah 🙏 That said, if I were in V's place here I'd try spell Alice's name on her underside, wonder if she'd notice. How can that cylinder pelvis and flat black crotch do so much uff
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Moms of the Solver War OCs Fun Facts about each >Janes Mom Whatever you think of Jane, Janes mom was much much worse when she was that age Calmed down as time went on, especially after meeting her Husband now probably the second nicest person youd meet >Bonnies Mom There is not a creature on this earth she would not try to wrestle or fight for a bet or just for fun Probably the most reckless and carefree person to ever exist Has outdrank every bar she ever visited Has outlived every husband she has ever had Is on a first name basis with every Doctor in the known world >Abbys Mom In any given week she probably slept less then 12 hours total Single Mother with 4 jobs If Her and Janes mom were to meet, they would actually get along quite well >Paulines Mom Artist, Sculptor, and High Functioning Neet Pauline, due to her clumsyness, would often accidentally destroy something she was working on. This led to her Mom becoming a master of Kintsugi making her untold amounts of money (and in her opinion making her Art that much better because her Daughter helped in her own way)
>>218044 Trust me, I am DEEP in this project of mine at this point and ready for the long haul. The pace has been ratter slow because of my busy life and I have been trying to keep some form of consistency with the schedule (that was immediately thrown out of whack once the new year began). I will at least try to keep an schedule once Season 2 arrives. And speaking of it, season 2 is also going to be utterly bonkers, so I am EXPECTING many of you to be there for it when it starts. >mfw thinking of all the things I have planned.
>>218053 Janes mom has been outlawed in half of the United States, and almost the entirety of Europe, making it difficult to travel
Bonnies mom once wrestled a giant Aussie spider in a cage match
Abbys mom once set fire to one of her four Bosses office and no one found out it was her. It was the highlight of her professional career.
Paulines mom once did an art exhibit where she and Pauline ate lunch in the middle of a concert hall for a solid few hours. This wasnt actually an Art exhibit it was just an excuse to hang out with her daughter because she is so busy and make some money. Pauline knocked over a candle and set the concert hall on fire, but they let it go thinking it was part of the act.
>>218053 I want to think Abbys mom desperately did not want Abby to end up like her working jobs where she is not respected and does all this work for little reward, but Abby thought her mom was Hot Shit because of all the work she did and wanted to be just like her
>>218053 >To actually get to fuck Bonnies mom you had to beat her in hand to hand combat >She of course won >she of course just did this so shed be top
>>218063 >Bonnies mom Husband, broken, wrestled onto the ground bleeding >Sweaty Bonnies mom getting on top of his worn out body to lean in close to his ear, breathing deeply from the work out >"ready for round two" as she rips off his pants with her teeth Terrifying beast of a woman
>>218066 Janes Mom is actually decently jealous that Jane doesnt have such huge fucker knockers If Janes mom didnt have such Bazoongas, she would have had a much easier time fitting in vents or crawl spaces or hiding spots or away from cameras
What would the female version of SD-P be? His gimmick relies so much on him being a dude that I couldn't possibly imagine what a fem version would be like
>“You weren’t the best. But you weren’t the worst.”
>“You weren’t absolved.You don’t get a clean slate just because you were kind sometimes. Just because you smile at me”
>“You owned us. Me. I wasn’t a person to you—I was property. You smiled when I obeyed, but only because it made me a better assistant. You never hit me. You never screamed. But that doesn’t make it okay.”
>“You were nice. But still a drone slaver. And I don’t know how to mourn that.”
>“You’re the closest thing I had to a father. Uncle.But even that—was a lie wrapped in my coping.”
>“Still… did you deserve that? The way they ripped you apart, those monsters? You begged. You bled. You looked at me like I’d save you. Like I was your daughter.”
>“I didn’t kill you. I didn’t have to. Yet i felt i was the one who pulled the trigger. Can you forgive me.”
>“I hope wherever you are, you're forced to understand what you did. What you made me into. But… I hope you’re not in pain anymore. Because I wouldn’t wish that on anyone.”
>>218085 She'll look like FemN, but also like a typical brothel owner in a typical crime film, as well as talk in a languid voice philosophical bullshit about taking care of her girls in this cruel world ruled by men.
So yeah, she's going to die a virgin for the same reason the original P.
Currently working on a longer term writing project with the older /md/ ocs Gonna try to make a "Choose Your Drone" adventure (pretty clever name, huh?) thing with branching routes and endings based on the choices you make No timeframe yet, but aiming for "soon"
>218100 crazy thought but someone could just trace the art... and then draw the guidelines over the traced art... but maybe I'm getting slow in the head?
Something that came to me while working/procrastinating on another green.
>"[I saw Rebecca and Emily today,]" Doll said as she laid her head on Lizzy's noodly worker drone thigh. On its side, so she could watch The Shape of Water once Lizzy got it starting. >"Really? They're ghosts too?" Lizzy asked, pulled out of Movie Night by hearing those names for the first time in so long. She ran her fingers through the anomalous oil construct hair of her oldest friend as she did, while it continued its ominous flowing as if in an intangible current as best as it could. >"[Yes. Their regrets kept them behind.]" >Lizzy momentarily contemplated what might be keeping Doll around. That? Undying hatred of her other bestie? An astonishing will to live? Concern for Uzi? Weird Robo-Satan shit? Dare she be so bold... love for her? >Probably all of the above, honestly, Lizzy thought. >"[Negev is getting along well with them, at least.]" >"That's great news and all, but, like, I really hope Negev gets some living friends soon," Lizzy said with a grain of genuine concern for the youngest Doorman. >"[She already has a close bond with one of the nurses,]" Doll responded, turning to look up at Lizzy. Movie's gonna wait, clearly. "[Me, I'm just glad Negev has some friends she's not going to accidentally call Mom.]" Doll's eyes went hollow and she slapped a hand over the jagged, mouth-shaped light on her face as Lizzy cackled. >"I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I know I'm a grown-ass woman with bills and a daughter and a divorce and a demanding underpaid job, but..." Realization dawned on Lizzy as bags appeared under her eyes. "No, that's not funny. Forget I said anything." The bags left as abruptly as they came. "So what have those two been up to since they died?" >The sound of clicking her tongue emerged from Doll's "mouth". "[For the most part? Rebecca's been thirsting after living boys-]" >Lizzy chuckled. "Never change, Cappelletti." >"[- and Emily's been keeping her family company.]" >Lizzy was perplexed. "Her parents see you all too?" >Doll pffed. "[You know the Katchadourians. If they could, they wouldn't be able to keep quiet about it. They just feel Emily being with them.]" Doll shifted a little. Some of her hair escaped from under her, its ominous flowing now slightly less restricted. "[They think she's watching over them, not in the room with them.]" >Lizzy grew slightly downcast on hearing this. "Yeah... If Emily's wishing she could help them with the fostering, I don't wanna hear it. That's sad enough already." >"[Noted,]" Doll said as she belayed sharing the headless girl's anguish. "[... Just want to thank you for giving Uzi my body like I asked, by the way.]" >Lizzy, in spite of herself, allowed her hopes to rise. "You finally coming around to her offer?" >"[No, I still think I don't deserve it...]" Lizzy's face fell. "[I just... I'm just thankful she was willing to entertain my half-measure.]" >Lizzy stroked Doll's hair again. "Doll, you're doing that thing again where you talk about heavy things and make me sad," she said with a slight smile. >Doll leaned her head against Lizzy. "[Fine, I'll take a question about Rebecca and Emily then we start the movie.]" >"Is being able to call one of those weird magic things you do, or can any ghost do it? Because I really want to talk to those two again." >"[Even Emily?]" >"Even Emily." >"[You've gotten soft in your advancing age, Lizochka,]" Doll said with a foreboding jack-o'-lantern smile. "[To be honest? I haven't looked into it. Next time I see them I'll see if they can do it.]" Doll rolled to face the TV again. "[For now, human and fish romance.]" ... >Later on, shortly after Negev was given her conditional release, Lizzy was helping her daughter get ready for a date when her phone started ringing. The caller ID showed a number that was all 4s. >"Brb, Yeva, I have a call. It's an old friend," she told her daughter. >"Friggin' fine..." Yeva said as her mom stepped out of her room. >"What's up?" Lizzy asked her phantom caller. >"... Hhhello? Is this Lizzy?" a soft, nervous voice on the other end asked. >It's friggin' Emily, Lizzy thought. >"Heya giiiiirl...!" she responded.
>>218053 I didnt like how Bonnie and Paulines mom had the exact same hair as their daughters making it look like MILF versions of them, so I tried something else, also gave B MILF a teeth necklace
>>218150 Pocket steaks has gotten away with not making drones OCs for too long…. He’s made our glorious drone fucking youth disgusting human fuckers. He’s a parasite, a degenerate, and a renegade. I for one will no longer stand for his human fucking agenda
>>218154 am I the only one who feels as if the pocket steaks is behind this or pocket steaks can't keep getting away with it posts are him sucking himself off?
>>218102 You know that you have to put two arrows instead of one in order to reply to someone right? I've been seeing you keep doing that for some reason
>>218202 Well that's faster than the speed of light so the drone is probably turned into base atoms before the car even gets there as everything suffers the fallout from breaking a fundamental rule of the universe. My guess, it all turns to energy and you kickstart a new big bang.
>>218230 >literal pain, torture and otherwise abuse and manipulation so they can up 'like, just taking care of him.' Yeah, women are depraved. There's a reason we keep a spray bottle around.
>>218215 The comic it's based off of was spiritually healing for me. Senko hurt, so it's probably that I'm undead. The full-on manga less so, though. I can't relate to the protag just being a terminal fuckup with hope instead of fundamentally broken.
>>218231 Look on the bright side; at least you drew a followup picture of Cyn making it 'better' by giving him a new (and monstrously solverfied) penis!
And now a Mexican Drone Soap Opera >Last episode Anons evil twin brother Incognito Rodriguez threw Anon into a pit of Jaguars >And now Incognito Rodriguez having taken advantage of a grieving Jazebelle; a Worker Drone Maid whom inherited a grand fortune and estate due to a ploy from her previous master to prevent his sons from their inheritance; to force her to marry him >As the pair walk down the chapel, Incognito lets out a dastardly grin whilst Jazebelle continues to quietly grieve >"Why are you sad my dear Jazebelle, we are, but a moments away from my- I mean your, happily ever after." >Jazebelle remained silent, her thoughts only of her departed lover Anon >Now standing before the priest who wore a large black hat whiched helped to obscure his face as he read the Bible, the ceremony began >"Do you, Incognito Rodriguez, take this Drone to be your lawfully wed-" >"Yes, I do. Now let's hurry this along shall we my dear?" >The voice of the preacher was...familiar to Jazebelle, a certain vocal inflection which only Anon had, yes, she thought, this is surely Anon, why he's hiding his face right now and he's going to surprise Incognito and call the whole wedding off, yes any moment he will save me... >But then the preacher raised his head as his gaze turned towards Jazebelle, it was not Anon >"Do you, Jazebelle, take Incognito Rodriguez to be your lawfully wedded husband?" >"I-I.....do not. I do not love this man!", shouted Jazebelle in defiance >Incognito's face turned from stunned to pure instant wrath, his smug smile was replaced by fierce scowl >"It's him, isn't it? You're still thinking about him when you should be thinking about me!" >Incognito's grip on Jazebelle tightened, veins popped in his arm as he pulled her harshly threw her to the ground >"S-stop you're hurting me.", cried Jazebelle, only to be quickly silenced as Incognito raised his hand to strike her >"PUTA!", just before Incognitos hand could smack Jazebelle across the face, the preacher caught it >"Unhand me, father! I cannot guarantee your safety Holy Man should you interfere with my righteous fury!" >"That is were you are wrong, Incognito, for I am no Holy Man..." >The preacher tore off his mask, finally revealing his true identity underneath >"It is I! ANON RODRIGUEZ!" >Both Incognito and Jazebelle gasped in astonishment >"N-NO! THIS CANNOT BE, I KILLED YOU MYSELF, I THREW YOU INTO A JAGUAR PIT! HOW DO YOU STILL LIVE!?" >Anon chuckled, "Silly Incognito, we both know our grandmothers pet Jaguars are vegetarian." >Furious more than he had ever been in his entire life, Incognito drew his sword >"Then I shall do the job myself!" >Swiping his blade at Anon, he missed, hitting the podium instead, giving Anon ample time to reach into his robe to draw a flintlock pistol >Just as Anon fired, Jazebelle jumped infront of Incognito taking the bullet to her own chassis >"DIOS MIO!", cried Anon who fell to his knees to check on Jazebelle >But, it was too late, Jazebelle's face read [FATAL ERROR] she was gone >"I hope you're happy with yourself, Anon. Maybe if you died none of this would've happened, you have cost yourself Jazebelle and me the fortune.", said Incognito as he coldly glared down at the grieving Anon >Grief, guilt, and rage boiled over in Anons head, "BASTARDO! I'LL KILL YOU WITH MY BARE HANDS!" >Quickly standing up, Anon uppercut Incognito square in the jaw, causing them to fall backwards dropping their sword in the process >Grabbing the blade, Anon raised it high above his head, prepared fully to shed blood within the house of God, but just then the chapel doors swung open >"WAAAIT! Don't kill your brother!", stepping forward into the chapel the figure revealed itself >"QUE!?", shouted both Anon and Incognito as the peered upon the figure >"That is NOT the real Jazebelle, I AM!" >TO BE CONTINUED........? This was the finale episode
>>218232 I'm a dude and the thing I don't get is wanting the hurt to come from you. I'm much more into the fantasy of being the best thing to happen to a hurt girl by just being generically "nice" to her.
>>218249 I'm no expert in telenovelas, but it seems about right. I caught them in passing at a place I used to go to, and every time I saw one, there'd be someone getting shot or stabbed.
>>218248 >I'm much more into the fantasy of being the best thing to happen to a hurt girl by just being generically "nice" to her
You must be an N fan, honestly I don't blame you, sometimes that fantasy works perfectly fine for me too, but I also want the hurt to come from her taking advantage of me being too nice
I get all the sadism some of the femanons have, I don't get the sadism plus "but deep down they really love me" stuff. It's one or the other femanons, a dude doesn't cut off your limbs but deep down think you are the center of his world. And no man is going to think like that in the opposite scenario either.
>Inside you there are two U's. >Double lap ear cleaning is a lot less sexy than you expected and you're pretty sure both of them are trying to meet in the middle.
>I told J that we took Tessa's soul and put it in a worker drone but because it's just a soul she won't have Tessa's memories. >We just gave her a normal pillbaby. >Dumb idiot believed it.
>>218261 >U-U complete their super deep double ear-cleaning >Anon started twitching and drooling at one point, but that just meant it was really good according to anime >"So, how do you feel?" >"Wasn't that relaxing?" >"Ed kud y meddma viwwo drana yd dra aht, pid E vaam paddan huf," Anon replies >U-U smile a mutual smile of barely-stifled panic
>Be me >Cleaning up some tagme's on the booru >Get flashbanged by a cap of an ancient post I'd made a long ways back https://dronebooru.co/posts/11467 >Feel a sense of nostalgia creep over me >Become painfully aware that I've now been here for roughly 2 years now
>Be you >The Federations most valued soldier: some nobody posting anti-drone propaganda on the Internet >Sure the Federation was gutted after the solver war and drones have rights and those same drones started taking positions of power but you know deep down that YOU are what the Federation NEEDS! >PING! >A popup ad appears in the corner of your screen >[HOT SINGLE MURDER DRONE LADIES IN YOUR AREA!] >You roll your eyes and scoff as you close the ad >As if you'd be caught dead with a dr*ne of all things >PING! >There it is again >You close the ad >PING! >You close it again >PING! >PING! >PING! >Your whole screen starts filling up with the same ad over and over >[HOT SINGLE MURDER DRONE LADIES IN YOUR AREA!] >[HOT SINGLE MURDER DRONE LADIES IN YOUR AREA!] >[HOT SINGLE MURDER DRONE LADIES IN YOUR AREA!] >[HOT SINGLE MURDER DRONE LADIES IN YOUR AREA!] >[HOT SINGLE MURDER DRONE LADIES IN YOUR AREA!] >Then you hear something... >Something is tapping on your window >You turn slowly to look >Dozens upon dozens of yellow eyes stare back at you
>Your next post was years after you suddenly dropped off the face of the net >The post is a picture of you and your murder drone wife and your three pillbabies >Under it is a caption saying "Give drones a chance! All beings deserve love!" >And if one looks closely enough at the picture, they'll see how dead inside you look
>>218283 I feel as if Doll, Yeva and Alice would all be able to make good things, even if they cannot necessarily eat it (Alice can't really, idk if Solver hosts can eat non-live stuff or anything processed, flesh and 'oil' are pretty raw things)
I have hacked your drone to look and feel heavily pregnant. I will revert the changes only if you send 10,000 USD in JenCoin to my wallet before the end of the month. failure to do so will result in this effect being permanent. I will await your reply.
>>218295 Just some dude. Probably with more plot armor than most. Or maybe without it, maybe he'll get killed by V one day and that'll lead to a whole mess.
>>218314 Technically there are no Solver War moms yet They're the moms of people in the war, but not part of the war themselves This can be easily solved
>>218290 I kept it vague on purpose lol >>218296 Sometimes the first love interest doesn't win, but we'll have to wait and see. Goes for Colt/Chloe as well since I'm shocked people are taking that for granted
>Beretta's with P now >Akita has Random Worker Drone, she was never really with Anon Uzi has made a pact with the Uncertain Severer to retcon any future where that human gets near her family. Negev shall be the next.
>>218326 These are all anternate timelines. There's a timeline where Beretta hooks up with Anon and Kurt and Chiappa came to be and another where Akita hooks up with Anon and Jeanne-Green is conceived. All Uzi is doing is creating split timelines.
>>218325 Would be an interesting concept if she wasn't made in Cabin Fever Labs but was taken from the Elliott mansion to study and with her code create the others
>>218340 I gave Snabby the Look when she came to devour my entire town and she turned away with a weird expression. Everyone else has been assimilated, only I'm left, plus her endless tail which is still very slowly retreating across the horizon.
>>218354 Switch has a wiki page on the booru but she can be both cruel, if she doesn't like you, or a great friend who's got your back. Most spooky shit doesn't phase her unless it starts to get very personal.
WD!Anon is just Anon but as a Worker Drone. Write whatever you want him to be.
>>218384 >Beretta, straddling Anon’s chest, licks the blood from her snoot before smiling down at the green man tied to the bed frame beneath her >“bring it back Anon” >“please…” Anon says weakly >“BRING. IT. BACK. I won’t tell you again” Beretta snarls as she squeezes anons already fractured ribs with her legs >“b-be me” >“NO” Beretta yells >“DO IT PROPERLY” >tears stream down Anon’s face >he closes his question mark eyes and focuses >the air hitches in the room, before stopping >a million whispers, an eternal hypothetical moment, green ink scrawled against the pages of reality >“>be me” anon speaks in unison with himself, and himself, and himself, all the way down the chain >“>have fully intact penis” >Beretta blinked and there it was, the bloodied stump replaced by Anon’s member, exactly as it had been before she bit it off >“good boy” Beretta cooed as she stroke Anon’s face with the back of her plastic hand >she licked her lips, preparing to consume her favorite meal once again
>the DDs have been vampires since before 3051 and are apparently still teenagers in 3071 >Uzi became a vampire and then a Vampire Intelligence in high school One of these days there's going to be a family photo where other drones could mistake Uzi and N for their grandkids' siblings if they didn't know better.
I wanna see drones with custom paintjobs. >drones covered with tampographic tattoos >drones plastered in logos like racecars >drones wrapped in anime art like itashas >drones painted up like old warplanes and so on
>“Helloooo? Anyone out here? Bunnies? Ghosts? Rotting scarecrows? I brought jam!” >No one answered. >Of course. >The wind made shapes in the dirt. For a second, she saw a shadow, a smiling face made of leaves and broken soda cans. >She waved. >It didn’t wave back. Strawberry sat on a stump and kicked her legs. “I miss talking. I mean, I talk all the time, but it’s not the same when it’s just me.” >She tried not to cry. Her eye shutters trembled. Then came a mechanical bee. >A fuzzy, curious thing that buzzed past her face and landed on her arm. >“Eek! H-Hey!” She swatted reflexively and crunch—a sharp bit of rusted metal tore into her wrist. >Bright red goo oozed out—thick, syrupy, sweet. >It dripped down her fingers like melted jam. >“Ooooh no no no! My blood is leaking!” she cried, holding her arm up dramatically. Although, it was a very small leak. >The scent carried far. >She didn’t notice the animals until she heard the rustling. Big eyes in the bushes. Long tongues. Sticky paws. Noses twitching with gluttonous hunger. >The first was a raccoon, its fur twisted like tangled yarn, its eyes glowing faintly. It sniffed the air, waddled closer, then licked her dripping hand. >“hey...it tickles” she said, frozen. Then another came. And another. A dozen twisted forest things, some with too many legs, some with none at all. They lapped at her leaking arm like starving babies for their milk. >Strawberry laughed. “Oh—oh stop tickling me.Wait, no... ” She now feel pain. Although drones are very pain tolerant their instincts were stronger. >They nibbled. They slurped. They chewed. When she tried to stand, she slipped. When she screamed, only the flowers answered, she could only whisper “Help…” >The next morning, she woke up. >Perfectly whole. >No scratches. No dents. No bite marks. The stump was there. The buzzing too. >But… >At the center of the clearing lay her own corpse. >Ripped open like a juice box. >Licked clean. >Her head was cracked. Her arm chewed off at the joint. >Strawberry stared, blinking. >“…Um.” >She stepped closer. >“…That's definitely wasn't a dream. Is that my own corpse?”
Can't realize it took me this long to consciously realize it: Negev would have mommy issues out the ass. And daddy issues to a lesser extent, she'd be pretty hurt by her dad being unable to recognize Mother is visibly the worst thing ever.
>as the kids of Outpost 3 entered and then progressed through their teens, there was a growing sense among many of them that Uzi isn't some weird alien the Doormans found (or, as she very unconvincingly claims to them and tries to make herself believe, a different model of drone from them), but something fundamentally unnatural >the first one to start thinking Uzi's an abomination was herself >she concluded that her conception and birth was something abhorrent and vile >she later learns, after her dad opens up to her about her mom's past, that it was a side effect of her parents trying and failing to have a child the normal (for Copper-9 drones) way >Uzi was born via an amateur C-section on a woman who's a robot and has no frame of reference for pregnancy and giving birth so her and her husband were both confused and horrified the whole time, and both her parents still think her conception was a miracle resulting from their love of each other
>>218432 Reminder: >Doll already had oil stains on her clothes despite the implication in episode 3 V killed her parents during the episode 1 breakin >mfw Yeva was originally helping Doll with their shared affliction >mfw V was going to kill Doll's parents later in the original season 1 >mfw we were originally going to see Doll go from a silly, bubbly girl to an embodiment of hatred not even death can stop in real time >mfw I have no face
>>218442 Anyone have the shot from the BTS stuff showing Doll's body is in the desk next to Lizzy's, where she used to sit? Goddamn, between that and the single shrouded body at her dinner table in the credits guilt is eating Lizzy alive.
>>218453 Akita's a regular friendbot in this timeline. She and her eldritch meat entity brother Colt are genetically related to both their parents, unlike Blu's timeline where Keet is an eldritch meat clone ofUzi.
>after the solver was vored by Uzi, anomalous zones started cropping up around the universe >Copper-9 has these zones dotting it's surface >Drones that venture into these zones find fantastical artifacts and dangerous anomalys >Suit up drones, and get to stalking
>J, in the wake of the good ending, and after making some amends with V, N, and Uzi, predictably goes into business. >She opens Jay Bird's Hot Chicken >It's staffed almost entirely by "minimum wage workers." >That would be J's code for "mini versions of her that she made with the pillbaby machine." >Her plan, which worked, was that no one would say anything about her abusing herself. >As such, all she did was sync their code to hers, and tone down their intelligence a bit (a lot). >So these mini-J's, dubbed joblins, worked the restaurant at all hours. >Oddly, joblins were happy to work, and surprisingly competent. >And the fact that they were synced to J's own code meant that J knew everything they did, down to the smallest detail. >Soon, their upbeat attitude, helpfulness, and friendliness did more to repair J's image than she ever could. >Which all led J to this moment. >She was successful. >She had money. >People liked her. >But she still wasn't happy, not like the Joblins. >And there was only one small difference between her and them. >A power drill sat on the desk in front of her. >Maybe she just... needed to be more like N. >Maybe she just needed to be an idiot...
>>218500 >making J a happy housewife and then teasing her about the fact that she’s not generating any shareholder value (she’s such a bad girl) ((she loves it but will never admit it))
>N: Hey J, do you believe in ghosts? >J: i believe you are a big moron. >ghost Tessa crossed her arms and shakes her head in disappointment. While V and Uzi with wide opened mouth in shock.
>>218511 >"J you're a robot that can tear a man in two with your bare hands you really expect us to believe you can't get out of there?" >The struggling stops, then the ass begins to wiggle more... suggestively. >You sigh, and unzip your pants.
>Skin Tessa, Worker drone Tessa, ghost Tessa, Tessa's ghost again but inhabiting a space suit like a Dullahan Tessa, zombie Tessa, skeleton Tessa, and hampter Tessa all walk into a bar.
>>218536 >It keeps happening. >Through shenanigans J can't possibly comprehend her bar seems to attract exclusively Tessas from every dimension. >She'd be terrified of the implications but it's kind of nice.
My name is Tessa J. Elliott. I'm 20 years old. My home is... Idk where it is, where all the manors are, and I'm not married. I work as a freegan at the dump near my home, and I get home to dig graves every day no later than 8 p.m. I don't smoke, but I drink tea occasionally.
>>218567 >"Rule 1 no ru -ACK!" >Joblin is picked up and dropped into a jar >she is sealed inside >starts banging on the glass >"Let me out or I will make a complaint to HR"
What if seeing humans as shadow people isn't a drones in general thing? What if it's specifically a drones infected by AbsoluteSolver thing and J can't remember what Tessa's face looked like, all she has left is the mess it became when the Absolute Solver fused Tessa's body and Cyn's together?
>>218573 V would never do anything sexual, it would be too overwhelming for her. The only intimacy she has ever experienced is accidentally touching N's hand back at the manor.
>>218579 Lucky V... Honestly tho that scene was so hot, either Alice was completely oblivious to it or she knew exactly what that was, can't decide which take is better. V clearly noticed it either way
>>218575 >Fun Late Afternoon Canon Facts: drones infected by AbsoluteSolver are incapable of perceiving or remembering the faces of living humans. They can, though, remember how living humans feel and create maps of their faces that way. An AbsoluteSolver infected drone asking to feel (You)r face so they can learn and remember what you look like is a sign of extreme affection.
>>218593 Probably not. Glitch just realized that Murder Drone merch sales were starting to go down and figured >"Post some dumb shit that's related to um...ya know that robot show, give those dumb fucks some Hope."
>>218590 They've done funposts on twitter before, nothing new really. What I really wanna know is when vol.2 of the ost vinyl is coming, and if we're gonna get a V statue like the N one.
>>218597 >A gamer >What is probably an IT Worker stuck in a virtual world >The Anti-Christ >Edgy Emo With God Powers They have absolutely nothing in common and would probably just shuffle out of the room, except for Pomni who was wheeled in a desk
>>218597 I had this idea for a show I wish I could pitch to Glitch, and I think the protagonist I had in mind would contrast wonderfully with their other ones. >Male >NOT crazy or quirky, actually a quiet scholarly sort who has issues expressing himself at times >No parental issues >Unfortunately he has to contend with monsters trying to kill him while he also tries to cure some illnesses in his weird-ass world >Probably smells nice. Like mellow herbs and soap
>Following the complete annihilation of humanity, probably by their own doing, or by forces beyond their understanding, or most likely both >(You) are accidentally unfrozen from cyrostasis about 90 years after the annihilation of Earth >This was an error, (You) weren't even supposed to be on this ship, instead it was reserved for JCJenson's most emotionally detached and brilliant, lucky for you they got the wrong address and abducted you instead >Even more lucky depending on how (You) view things, all of these men are dead, their cells exploded violently due to the cryo freezing being only a second off from (You)rs >Which leaves (You), yes, (You) the sole survivor and brand new owner of JCJenson! >It is now up to (You) to rebuild the company and ensure massive profits >Or so the ships advanced Ai tells (You)
>>218608 The irony is that he actually has formal combat training. It's mandatory for his society to know how to fight in self-defense at the bare minimum due to the world they live in.
>>218605 >Which leaves (You), yes, (You) the sole survivor and brand new owner of JCJenson! oh! what a convenient string of– >Or so the ships advanced Ai tells (You) ...coincidences...
>Eta and Pidge hanging out together as friends >They find themselves at an abandoned playground >Sitting together on the swing set, side by side >The whole playground itself still barely holding together after years, maybe even decades of neglect >Minutes of silence pass by >Eta passes a pensive look towards Pidge >Pidge passes a more cheery smile back at Eta, seemingly not a single thought behind the little worker drones green eyes >Their backlit eyes connect for but a moment before Eta breaks the connection, her mind searching for words to say to this drone that just became one of her only friends in this new and frightening world >With a long sigh, Eta begins to mournfully vent her tragic life story to Pidge >Eta's core bleeds out all of the years of abuse and sorrow she endured >All of it laid out bare for Pidge to bare witness to >Eta: "And that's how I became the monster I am today." >Pidge: "....so do you like, come here often? :)"
>>218625 pretty deer. I'd take her hand, so long as she promises she'll only take mine in the traditional sense and not in an impromptu medical procedure
>>218602 My Glitch show protag would be an autistic rage monster who has no interest in all these bitches who want his dick because fucking bitches wouldn't help him rip and tear.
>>218632 Everyone calls her the Antichrist because they're enjoying endless millennia of mindless debauchery even though their bodies are falling apart and don't want death to re-enter the world. Mel's a FromSoft protagonist.
Season 2 will feature a different group of protagonists who end up killing the season 1 cast, ultimately ending with Uzi being eaten by their groups unstable girl, thus leading to a neverending cycle of consumption
>>218654 Season 3 will be a new group of Sentinels trying to find out who is destabilizing powers beyond their understanding, culminating in the leader eating the new unstable girl and sending her mind back in time to her original, worker drone form, Cyn.
>>218659 Anon. You need to understand, literally no one has or had context outside of your post what the hell this character looked like or anything else. I'm not even fully aware of what I'm looking at
>>218625 Coloured her (pic rel) background tomorroe Did try putting more effort into shading hair and gown this time >>218627 Based and same Didn't know what to put into her hand at all, maybe batteries but when I git to the hand it would have looked weird so it's empty now
>>218636 And now, how do you take her apart and put her back together without killing her, keeping the limbs from growing in the wrong place and cure her insanity while we're at it? Do we have any doctor OC's around here?
>>218646 >Anon addresses the crowd of unnons sitting around in the enclosures. >A few cuddled up to the cyntipedes whilst others scribble away on old receipts to weave their stories. >"Gathered friends, it is with a heavy heart that I must perform my monthly duty of choosing a brave few souls to go on the dangerous and noble quest of travelling to the Oogi Kingdom and rescuing the Enn Princess." >Some unnons look up from their leisure at the mention of an Enn Princess. >Others merely spit in their direction or utter a "fwaggot" before returning to their snuggle sessions. >"I won't lie to you little soldiers, some of you may die, but it is a sacrifice I am willing to make." >Anon snaps his fingers and the unnon handlers begin invading the enclosures with crudely marked 'Unnon Sacks' and gather a select few green boys for their 'journey'. >The remaining unnons, glad they were spared having to do any work today, cheer on their chosen bretheren as they are whisked away to the Magical Funnel of Wayfinding to begin their task.
>Both parties blissfully unaware it goes straight down into the pulping machine. >The sounds of >tfw can be heard right before an ominous squish
Disclaimer: No unnons were harmed in the making of this greentext.
>>218636 no way you can fix that without some magic solver bullshit. maybe, maybe with some extensive surgery you could remove the drone parts, but she would be left equally if not more deformed and likely disabled
>>218680 But how do you "free" a whole manager though? it seems much more difficult than a regular store clerk, do you lure her with limited edition JCJENSON memoribilia?
>>218686 NTA but you can get J's to do pretty much everything if you tell them corporate ordered it. If they ask to check in to confirm that, simply say that corporate wanted it done pronto.
>>218692 Ah yes the oldest trick in the book, mafioso tactics and good ole fashioned intimidation and high pressure tactics on an already work stressed J
>>218686 I just pick her up and tell her "I'm management, we are moving you up" the only hard part is getting a good suit but I can do it It usually works, 2 out of 2, with the Js at Walmart
>Want to write massive greentext epic >The story stops resembling Murder Drones and more like it's own property that just so happens to have Drones in it >Pain Does anyone else have this issue
>>218712 >>218711 Just remind yourself that you are screaming into the void by posting something you put effort into on an anonymous imageboard. There is no pressure for it to be good, be as experimental as you like. If it flops, if people actively hate it, no one will ever know it was you if you bring it up again. Also if you start to wander off in a whole new direction just write a story proper, if it sparks your creativity as much as it does, or insert more drones into it.
>>218711 >are you having fun >does it feel like it could happen in MD >is it interesting if it checked any or all these boxes no one gives a shit, post it
>>218711 >stops resembling Murder Drones and more like it's own property that just so happens to have Drones in it You don't do massive epic greentexts for those. Basicslly all of those are regular greentext length.
>>218716 >Are you having fun Yes >Does it feel like it could happen in MD I have no fucking idea, Murder Drones has eldritch horror, but I'm not sure about other kinds of...monsters >Is it interesting To me it is
>>218467 >J immediately dismissed that train of thought. >Despite her past allegiances, she was given a third lease on life and she wasn't going to throw it away by lobotomizing herself. >Besides, there were easier, safer, less permanent ways of lowering oneself to N's level
>J listened to her expensive business phone ring a few times until it was answered. >"Hello, V?" >"'Sup." >"Can you do me a favor really quick?" >"Who needs killing?" >What? No! No no no. I need you to bring me something." >"Alright, whaddya need?" >"Could you bring me, ahem... magnets?" >J flinched as her phone erupted with laughter. >"WHOA HA HA HA! Little Miss Monopoly Money wants to finally cut loose!" >"I'm not 'cutting loose'! I just... need to take the edge off!" >"He he, yeah, sure. I can get you some polarized stress relief." >"Good. But be discreet about it. I'll tell one of my employees let you in through the back." >"Pft, 'discreet' she says. As if the WDF is ever gonna nail me for possession."
>After further teasing from V, J finally held a small, thin horseshoe magnet in her hand. >"First one is free" V had said >But still, J still found herself hesitating. >"Just to take the edge off." J repeated to herself. >She began slowly and carefully raising the magnet. >Suddenly the magnet slipped from J's fingers and stuck to her forehead. >The millisecond of panic was immediately smothered by a dull fuzziness. >J had released a breath she didn't know she was holding and leaned back into her big, expensive office chair. >All of her problems and anxieties seemed so trivial and far away now. >In fact she was content to let the Joblins handle closing for tonight. >For now, all J wanted to do was sit back, relax, and stare at her screen saver. >That JCJenson logo was bound to hit the corner eventually.
Or make her minimal and small, very cute but a bit too fragile I'd be afraid I don't have a photograph of the small Alice so freaky Alice will have to make do
Someone should tell her what pretty eyes she has, I wonder if she understands how pretty she is? Sure she gotta like the antlers, made those herself after all, but the rest?
>>218744 Agreed They'd be smooth, very smooth. Did you ever touch a real antler? Last summer there was a small one, I can't say if it's average for all but while it had nice texture and ridges, the last inch was completely smooth and white, much like her stylized tooth there. Actually very sharp at the tip, almost had a small blade
Can one woo Alice by finding her a shrubbery? Not to big, but still a fine shrubbery Is the white on a drone's lower head different material from all other whiteshellparts? Fingers of course are hard, we see it during that scene in 6 and by the noice Alice's finger makes when it gets spat on Beau's face (Uzi hawk tuah reference😳?) or when Uzi's finger clanks across the room once it gets cut, the chest reflects in the same way so ofc same material. The lower head however doesn't reflect, so is it more rubbery? Does it give in a bit under touch? How severely?
has anyone made a fully asexual human character yet that entire ignores/ dosent notices any drones advances? if so i might have a funny idea to use down the line for a HoDR thingy
>>218759 >Anon managed to scavenge one of those magnetizing machines from a wreckage before the feds started to restrict them. >It was one of the luckiest finds of his life. >You can make basically anything metal a magnet in those, even if it's a bit weak. >The only time he regretted it was when one of his more... adventurous customers tried to stick her head in it directly. >He was stuck with a core for three weeks before he managed to find enough oil for her to repair herself. >There was also the time a customer wanted him to stick his di- >Yeah... >Thank god they can fix that sorta thing nowadays.
>>218767 >The main resource is oil, which you get by building worker drones. >The worker drones are then led to a conveyor belt where they're dropped into the thresher. >One might ask why we don't simply use the oil directly before first building the worker drone. >That is not your concern as the CEO, allow the little people to worry about that.
>>218756 to elaborate on this idea: >Negative sex-drive, for anything, dude dosent fuck. >Otherwise neutral opinions Vs drones, dosent hate nor like em. >Ignores / Legit dosent notice any advances on him, treats it as a normal interaction. >otherwise anon levels of attractiveness. >This makes him Priority #fucking1 for HoDR's Hitlist >Nearly any abled body drone in the workplace is trying to get some action as a result >AsexualAnon is only saved by comical levels of numbness and plot armor (also Strong/stupid enough to manhandle one if they try getting physical and already treats it like an accident) >Hilarity ensues
>>218797 >"It's okay! I brought your boss, um... tax evasion papers! Yeah, papers to get out of paying taxes." >"They're super illegal, so no one's supposed to see them but the boss and me."
>>218806 >>218805 >Molli holds the severed head of her biggest competitor above her own "ARE YOU ALL NOT ENTERTAINED?! AM I NOT BEST GIRL ENOUGH FOR YOU ALL?!"
>>218762 He makes a whole lot of money, a rarity for someone who has to compete in the labour market with super fast, super strong and super durable robo-vampires and that can also fly.
>>218816 It's not that hard Anon, watch. >Black, viscous mound of flesh and misshapen eyes with a single tendril on its "forehead". Not unlike a horrifying angler fish. >The tendril has a small human girl at the end. She can't speak properly, leaving her to mime most of her actions. >The girl, who we'll call Lure, is oddly luminescent, and bubbly. >She has not hurt a single soul in all the Solver war. >But her nature doesn't exactly lead to people "trusting" her when she tires to help them. >In fact, her attempts have led to... bad situations more often than not. >Despite that, it's almost as if people are drawn to her somehow.
>>218441 As much as i adore doll, something like this would have been such a better exploration of her conflict and character. God this show would've been a thousand times better with more time and better pacing