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This new boards system is weird.

>>50665
Apparently its only a temp measure, it will be 'fixed' soon-ish

Will there be a thread this weekend?

>>50666
i hope it isn't 'fixed' too much, this is way easier to look at and way faster to use

>>50667
Sure. When should we post it?

>>50669
I dunno... maybe I'll do it

>>50669
>>50670
New /co/ thread: http://boards.4chan.org/co/thread/61680904

>>50672
Wouldn't mind an NSFW version of that chart, too.

>>50685
She's a pornstar: http://www.boobpedia.com/boobs/Selena_Star

Great thread, guys

>>50683
did we ever figure out the mask?

Guys, need your help.

I want to update the script list on the wiki and the Pastebin. But I'm not sure if I got all the new versions. Here's what I have gathered so far:

>https://www.dropbox.com/s/6q9forjm11fvqgs/star-striker%20solo%20edit.celtx
Garuda's edit to Star-Striker #1. Is this the latest version?

>https://www.dropbox.com/s/4aob6w4y1d8745q/supermoms%203.celtx
Garuda's new script. It's called "Supermoms #3", and I'm confused, since there's already a different Supermoms #3 out there. Is this supposed to be #5?

>https://www.dropbox.com/s/8ssbu04rinj4uxc/fans_nnn.celtx
>https://www.dropbox.com/s/l0l6cu25t6ejfih/fans_nnn.html
The newest but still unfinished version of "Fans". Is it supposed to be #4, as I tentatively wrote on the wiki, or is it a spin-off one-shot?

>https://www.dropbox.com/s/apa12r7us4fm3fm/moe.celtx
Mothers of Evil #1, I suppose.

Are there any more new scripts I have missed? Thanks in advance!

P.S.: I haven't yet read some of these! I'll read them soon, and would def give some feedback

Lol: http://justinmdurden.tumblr.com/post/85791702829

>>50693
>Garuda's edit to Star-Striker #1. Is this the latest version?
No, I re-edited it.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/g9wc7d5prfbkng7/star-striker%20solo%20edit%202.celtx

>Mothers of Evil #1, I suppose.
Really just a Supermoms issue where the lair is established and they fight the Mothers of Evil for the first time. Could be issue #4 or #5 or somewhere along those lines.

>>50695
Where did he post this? It's not on his usual Tumblr.

>>50696
I see, thanks.
But now I'm even more confused about the numeration!

>>50697
He posted it in the /co/ creations thread on /co/, since he didn't know we have our own threads again
Btw, could you post a link to his Tumblr?

>>50693
Actually, looks like Garuda deleted the old Issue #3 Celtx version, and now only the HTML version of it remains. I'm very, very confused.

To clarify:
Old Issue #3: Supermoms spend time with their kids and each other
New Issue #3: Supermoms go to the Pot Luck Dinner

>>50698
I still don't get the numeration. I think issue 1, 2, and 3 are set in stone but beyond that who knows.

His Tumblr is http://chogorimountain.tumblr.com/

I think we should replace the Star-Striker in the OP image with >>50695, and change the Tropica to something else (as Tropica doesn't wear shoes and his Tropica drawing in the OP image does have shoes for some reason).

>>50699
I have old issue #3 on my computer. It wasn't very good, and there's nothing covered in it that couldn't be covered (or isn't already covered) in solo issues of each mom. Also it does a few things that aren't canon, such as none of the other moms knowing Mend's husband is really Shadow Boy.

Also, I think the idea all along was to do solo issues that take place after issue #2, all leading to the potluck dinner issue, so that one being #3 makes more sense than what the old #3 was.

>>50700
Thanks for the link!

>I think we should replace the Star-Striker in the OP image with >50695, and change the Tropica to something else (as Tropica doesn't wear shoes and his Tropica drawing in the OP image does have shoes for some reason).
I hope I won't offend any of my favorite artists with this, but let me explain how I choose the representational pics both for the OP pics, and for the wiki articles.

The principle I use is: colored full body images with canon outfit. Colored so people can see the design colors, full body so that we don't get over9000 questions or misunderstandings about their leg- and footwear (I speak from experience here), and canon outfit because, well, it's a kind of official representational pic of the characters' designs.

Now Chogo.Ri's current SS picture is cool, it's one of my favorite SS pics, but it's
a) not full body;
b) the hotpants look even less like hotpants and more like a thong (which is very much okay for just a fan art pic, but not for the representational pic of the character's design; it's the very same reason I didn't use Bellend's pic)

As for Tropica, Chogo.Ri's pic has one problem (non-canon shoes), but it's atm the most fitting Tropica pic we have. E.g. JMD has drawn a lot of sexy Tropica, but it's either not full-body, or not in color...

I feel there's no rush in this; as soon as I'll see more fitting pics, I'll use them.

>Old issue #3
I see.
But there were also some good establishing moments, e.g. Keiichi with Shaundra. Maybe it could be reworked, at least partly, into a further issue?
Or maybe make it issue #4?

>>50701
>But there were also some good establishing moments, e.g. Keiichi with Shaundra
A lot of the same sentiment on the relationship of those two in particular is touched on in the Diva solo, and even a little bit in the Kaiju solo.

I think in the next thread we should focus on designing family members and other secondary characters. As far as I can tell, we have all the Supermoms and Mothers of Evil's designs finalized, as well as Lord Darkthorne and Sinister Sorceress Seductra (well, we could do with designing the villains' civilian identities).

>>50703
I don't think we should make such an organized push for this. Why the rush? Let it all happen naturally. I'm personally not too hot for a three-thread brainstorm session like with Kaiju.

>>50703
P.S.: What I feel we should focus on, is discussing the scripts, and ironing out some lore. Meanwhile, iirc, some drawfriends are working on the Boob/Butt Charts. Plus I hope we'll get some random Supermom art, which is always welcome!

I wonder, should I upload Whargleblargle's new pic of SS and Diva, and a censored version of JMD's new Tropica x Mend pic, on the wiki? Or would that be too lewd?

>>50706
Too lewd. Let's play it safe with the wiki.

>>50707
Got it.

But does it mean we wouldn't be able to use >>50672 on the wiki, either?

>>50708
The boob chart by itself would probably be fine. I'm just wary of anything that actually shows nudity.

>>50709
Ah, I see your point.

>>50695
Hnnnggggg, this picture. Something about it, the face maybe, makes it my favorite Star-Striker picture ever. She truly is best mom.

>>50711
Her face is very cute and motherly here, and combined with the ultraslutty outfit, it's just the best combination

>>50713
Supermoms is a different universe from the /co/verse so I think it would be fine to use her.

>>50692
idk looks out of place imo.
its cute but feels off.

Will there be a thread this weekend?

>>50718
Yes.

http://boards.4chan.org/co/thread/61912716

>>50721
Welcome to the new thread, JMD!

What a sexy Tropica~

Whelp, the Supermoms thread died in the night

>>50725
Yeah, missed it. Did anyone save the Anti-Kaiju?

>>50721
Oh snap! Thank you, that's a great Tropica! I didn't want to impose on artists with such formal requests, oh well

>>50723
>>50724
JMD was on a roll today.

>>50725
:(
>>50726
>Did anyone save the Anti-Kaiju?
It appears LiefeldianAbomination drew it, and I think he's aware of this thread, so all we need to do is wait for him to post it.

>>50727
Good!

Okay, I'll try summarizing the ideas about Anti-Moms we have.

>The world
Most anons seemed to support the idea of a world not unlike DC's "Earth 3", where heroes are villains and villains are heroes. The Anti-Moms are the most dangerous supervillain team in that universe.
Writeup from the thread:
>Hellfire City is a crime-ridden hellhole. After the teenage supercriminal gang, the Teen Fiends, seemingly perished in their ultimate fight against the last major hero, Duke Lightthrone, supercrime has been on the decline (ordinary crime has remained, of course). But recently, the former Teen Fiends have resurfaced, more experienced and dangerous, as the most evil supervillain gang in Hellfire City – the Anti-Moms!

>Sternbrecher (Anti-Star-Striker)
There's a pic of her on the wiki. Judging by her costume and name, she seems to idolize this universe's analog of nazis (probably the ones that create robot gorillas in the main universe) with the same passion as Star-Striker loves freedom and apple pie.
If we go with amplifying and twisting Supermoms' personality traits, then Sternbrecher could be domineering, tyrannical, power-hungry and calculating.

>(Anti-Diva)
Anti-Diva could have been brought up by villains on Earth, or maybe by Krushorr himself (later overthrowing him and becoming a ruthless galactic conqueror herself). Or maybe Divalonians in this universe were actually a very evil and warlike race, who got blown up while trying to conquer the planet of the valiant space rebel Krushorr?

>Oniyome? (Anti-Kaiju)
Need to hear LiefeldianAbominations ideas on her. Personality-wise, would we go with amplifying and twisting Kaiju's personality trait, or with an opposite of them?

>(Anti-Sig Rune)
An ice giantess who's made of living blizzard. As Sig Rune is haughty towards mortals, and likes to solve problems with force; Anti-Sig Rune hates mortals with a genocidal passion, and likes killing and spilling blood.

>(Anti-Tropica)
Instead of plants, controls metallic plant-like "installations" with lots of sharp and rusty bits. Her costume, instead of vines, is made out of barbed wire. While Tropica likes to flirt and torment men for fun, Anti-Tropica is a sadist who uses her vamp charms to bend men to her will, destroy their lives, blackmail them etc, and literally physically and mentally torture them. While Tropica is very jealous of Juan, Anti-Tropica reserves the worst fates for any woman who had the misfortune of being in the life of her male victims.

>Rend (Anti-Mend)
There's a pic of her on the wiki. Her powers include a poisonous/disease kiss. No suggestions about her personality have yet been made.

Oh and also, reposting from the thread:

First adventure:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/sf90hnd0yusu98n/supermoms01.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/a4o8ss7d682grxt/supermoms02.html

Countdown to Issue 3:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/eaz50f6ozgqk7o2/starstriker01.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/polb1j1asymp0ax/diva01.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/t31ms2w7vymtg72/mend01.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/hn2udjjwlq56fab/kaiju01.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/lpn9r8z68rvydk5/sigrune02.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/e4yybtjaiqupp7q/tropica01.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/1jnjfbegopr418n/mrsevil01.html

Issue 3 and beyond:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/igzt6c9l6o1s77p/supermoms03.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/292eyykglzlskje/supermoms04.html
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ft3n2z4fuiab5ew/supermoms05.html

https://www.dropbox.com/s/4yuetfvd8dsp33b/ss2.celtx

P.S.: There was a suggestion of conflating "Issue #1" and "Issue #2" into one Giant-Sized Issue. This idea has some merit, imo...

I think we should also work on creating a character design for one of the Supermoms European allies. If we did who would you suggest we concentrate on first?

>>50730
I'm the guy who suggested the European Dreams back then, and now I think they probably should be removed altogether. Because
a) we already have a fuckton of characters
b) a lot of character traits that were used in ED, were since used for different characters (e.g., Mrs.Evil is the gothy MILF, Codex is the magical MILF, Lord Darkthorne collects various artifacts from around the world, Diva is the alien MILF, Louspeaker and Protectora are the Italian MILFs, Loudspeaker has a mech suit, etc.).

So, I vote we prune them altogether – maybe we can reuse a concept or two with new characters (e.g. I'd still like to see an Indian MILF)

>>50729
We absolutely should combine #1 and #2. However, I need to do some proofreading/editing on #1 because I noticed an error a while ago and haven't gotten around to correcting it (Sigrun's hair in her civilian identity is wrong).

SUPERMOMS #1 EDIT:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ny7xrhrp5cjxal2/supermoms%201%20edit.celtx

Nothing major, just a bit of cleanup.

>>50733
You did a really great job working on this back story. But I'm a bit confused how see can see with a blindfold over her eyes.

Wasn't there talk about which child personality archtypes we haven't used yet?

Still no Anti-Diva?

Is LiefeldianAbomination aware of this thread?

>>50737
I think you mean Kaiju. And I guess not. Looks like we'll have to wait until Saturday.

>>50733
Hm, sounds interesting... will she mostly fight villains, or heroes, or both?
>>50734
Okay, I really need to get to reading the recent scripts
>>50736
We were more talking about which ones were already used... since we still haven't decided on some kids' personalities, and on Phero-Mona kids.
>>50738
Yeah, looks like he doesn't visit here for some reason.
>>50739
Nice pic! Hope it's not "last" as in last ever, but more like last for now? You rendered her new design pretty nicely (btw, the current wiki profile pic is the same design, just by a different artist). My only complain may be that the booty is not as big as it could be lol

>>50740
I posted that but I'm not K2. I just took it from his Tumblr.

>>50740
Please do get to reading scripts and critiquing them because, as a writer, it's really a letdown when I see nobody giving their thoughts on anything I write. I'm literally begging for criticism here.

>>50706
>>50707
>>50709
Yeah, keep it mainly SFW on the wiki. No one really knows what the full wikia policy is on this kind of stuff and I'm not too keen on attracting negative attention from them.

And I've been wanting to ask, but don't you think the pages are getting a little bloated with pics? Seems kind of silly to keep adding pics if the designs are still in flux if you ask me.

Aside from that
I still can't figure out how to get rid of that damn "uploaded by" thing that's now appearing under every thumbnail since the .css that was in place to prevent it from showing up isn't working anymore now that wikia has changed some of their code involving thumbnails.

>>50743
I think now that we have definitive designs for all of the Supermoms, we can cut down on the pic bloat by just picking the best picture for each Supermom under their current design and using that one on each Supermom page, and that's it.

>>50743
>Yeah, keep it mainly SFW on the wiki.
Understood. What about the >>50672 Boob Chart? Can it go there?

>And I've been wanting to ask, but don't you think the pages are getting a little bloated with pics? Seems kind of silly to keep adding pics if the designs are still in flux if you ask me.
You're probably right. I think maybe we should keep the bare minimum, and get rid of the outdated designs and most of the templates and sketches. (also see my reply to anon below)

>I still can't figure out how to get rid of that damn "uploaded by" thing that's now appearing under every thumbnail
Actually, this doesn't bother me too much, but yeah, it looks kinda weird.

>>50744
>picking the best picture for each Supermom under their current design and using that one on each Supermom page, and that's it.
I was thinking, maybe ~2-5 best pics of the current design, by different artists? Looking at the wiki pages for other characters, this seems to be the norm. Plus maybe a pic or two of the civilian/yoga clothes. Plus pics of supporting characters (Betsy Banks, etc). Or is this too much?

>>50745
Yeah, that pic would be fine.

>>50744
Let me know which pics need to be trimmed once you guys figure this out.
There's not any rush or anything since I don't think wikia imposes a pic limit.

>>50745
Of course not. If anything we need more drawings of the moms in their civilian clothing.

>>50734
Nice work on this script. I don't really see anything that needs rewriting

>>50748
Well, I did, so I made some minor edits. Download link is the same as in>>50734, it's just an updated version. Nothing major, just a few small tweaks.

And don't forget to look over my Star-Striker #2! https://www.dropbox.com/s/4yuetfvd8dsp33b/ss2.celtx

There's one thing we should consider. If we remove most of the pics from the wiki, they'll get reposted again and again in the /co/ threads. Now I'm not saying we shouldn't trim the wiki galleries, I'm all for it. I'm just saying, we should prepare for reposts

>>50750
There are already a lot of reposts in the threads. It's just like the /coc/ threads. I wouldn't worry too much about it, just worry when people start dumping old stuff.

>>50751
I agree. Her current look is pretty generic, and IMO she needs a more defining look. I'm thinking first and foremost Doc Martens. The mohawk should stay, though.

>>50752
Reposts are old stuff, aren't they?
Maybe we should make some kind of archive for the pics that are not present on the wiki? E.g., if we delete all old costume Diva pics, that means we'll lose three cool JMD drawings

>>50754
Someone really needs to replace that Starstriker picture with a better one

>>50756
That seems kinda...flat, don't you think?

The picture, not Star-Striker herself.

Also, it's not super representative of Star-Striker's design. The necklace, the invisible eyes...I don't know.

>>50757
That's just Corndog's style, mang, don't be hatin'

In any case, these two pics are ATM the ones that represent Star-Striker's design the best.

>>50754
While I love the Sig Rune pic that's in that image, we really need one in full color.

>>50759
We need more Siggy pics, period

>>50761
I like the one on the right the most.

New /co/ thread: http://boards.4chan.org/co/thread/62132370

Newest script links from the thread:

/co/stess Issue #1:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/d33n0e5r9ywr7bj/short1.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/9hbb1g0b82m3llu/short1.html

/co/stess Issue #2:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/bz28o4x07i1t9a6/short2.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/5xv7ppvshacuwqe/short2.html

/co/stess Issue #3:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/g7819c40nsgncw7/short3.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/9gpclu7jok65n6z/short3.html

Tweaked Unfinished Issue #4:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/tqoiw4pnuc0y8jo/fans_nnnn.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/njbiya5umggpx1r/fans_nnnn.html

Combined Issue #1 (former #1 and #2):
https://www.dropbox.com/s/yfo0djzhngwcdo5/supermoms%201.celtx

Star-Striker #2:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4yuetfvd8dsp33b/ss2.celtx

So, what should Betsy Banks' superhero name be?

Eventually she's going to have to come up with a name. We can hold it off for a while by having her cycle through terrible names or not being able to decide or something, but eventually she's going to have to come up with a name.

>>50775
It should be terrible! As well as her costume. That's the fun thing about her character.

Bonus points if Tommy suggests some sensible alternatives, but she disregards them straight away becuase they're "boring"

Reposting the latest Anti-Diva idea from the thread:

Diva's very popmusic-related and campy. While Diva's based on popmusic itself, how about Anti-Diva's based on laser light show effects!

So, her powers could contain:
- Shooting rows of colored laser beams – but as this universe is somewhat cartoonish, these laser beams have destructive laser power!
- If she projects a laser image on a building or surface – she can change it! (e.g., projecting a laser image of a hole on a bank wall)
- Able to create holographic constructs out of lasers
- Can use her lasers to temporarily blind her foes (e.g., starship pilots)

Downsides: Her powers are less powerful during daytime.

Btw, this also means that while Diva was active in the R&B scene, Anti-Diva was most likely a rave DJ.

>>50777
>visor
shoots spread lasers, takes time to recharge
>fingertips
shoot different-colored lasers, able to form laser projections on buildings and holographic constructs
>glowsticks
explode into a Jubilee-esque lightshow

>>50779
I like these!

Maybe lay on more of the sidekick flavor, since she initially wants to be SS's sidekick. Of your suggestions, I think Strikette has this flavor the most.
Some other ideas:
>Kid Striker
>Strike Lass
>Strikey/Strikie

Oh, also some name ideas from the thread:

>Anti-Tropica, the one with the sadistic metal stuff
Dolorosa

>Kaiju's familiar
Koyujin

Made the necessary changes to the two Star-Striker solos to account for the recent Betsy developments. Basically, in Star-Striker #1, she's wearing a Star-Striker costume rather than her own personal costume, so that way Betsy thinks that her mom has never seen her in her real costume. In Star-Striker #2, the key changes are in the dialogue between Betsy and Star-Striker to make it congruous with what was established in Star-Striker #1. There are also a few minor changes in both scripts. The following links are the absolute most recent edits of Star-Striker #1 and #2.

#1 Celtx: https://www.dropbox.com/s/te977upj90hp2lw/ss1.celtx
#1 HTML: https://www.dropbox.com/s/tsf7l8keqs5snre/ss1.html
#2: https://www.dropbox.com/s/4yuetfvd8dsp33b/ss2.celtx
#2 HTML: https://www.dropbox.com/s/5517ltrgl9euvl0/ss2.html

>>50782
Maybe in the first part, she still has a self-designed sidekick costume, but later changes the design because her mom has seen it?

>>50783
We would need to come up with another design, then. I think the one in>>50779 should be her final design, so we need to come up with a design for her preliminary costume.

And it would need to be significantly different from the final design, so it's reasonable that Star-Striker wouldn't recognize her daughter in costume again.

>>50783
Or, we could have Bev take the original costume away from Betsy, so she has to make another.

So I had an idea for a recurring villain character: Bad Juju.

Basically he/she is a voodoo priest-type who specializes in curses, things like that. The ideas I had for stories are one for a Tropica solo where Bad Juju "deactivates" Tropica's powers and she goes to her friends for help, before eventually finding help where she least expected it: her daughter Yolanda, and a team story where Bad Juju swaps the Supermoms' minds around, like for example Star-Striker and Sig Rune switch minds, and it happens to the whole team, and they have to pretend to be whoever they're mindswapped with until they can figure out a way to fix it.

What do you guys think?

>>50786
Those are fun story ideas, imo
But you need to make sure not to make this character too racially insensitive

>>50787
Come on, man.

New thread: http://boards.4chan.org/co/thread/62339993

New or edited scripts:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/u6uw8svzo67q4wk/mrsevil1.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/0i001kzk7cnrsgh/mrsevil1.html

https://www.dropbox.com/s/4yuetfvd8dsp33b/ss2.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/5517ltrgl9euvl0/ss2.html

https://www.dropbox.com/s/93b3gwggby10cwu/ss3.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/sfy9aw5oyu7xrut/ss3.html

https://www.dropbox.com/s/td66yy02u2f97r2/diva2.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mm1lu2rk4e74nso/diva2.html

https://www.dropbox.com/s/k6zjhgp9biwkmqp/short4.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/c9mtnlxh585xcqc/short4.html

Reposting my idea about Shaundra's past:

I just had an idea about Shaundra.

How about, after the Teen Queens' disbandment, Candy LaBelle left Sapphire City and started travelling around the U.S. with tours and gigs. When Shaundra was born, she didn't settle down, and continued living that style of life. Constant moving meant Shaundra had trouble making long-time friends. Coupled with the fact that Candy was too busy with her popstar job and often neglected Shaundra, that could lead to her becoming the delinquent she is today.

Candy and Shaundra may have returned to Sapphire City quite recently, maybe after Candy retired from an active popstar career. Shaundra tried to assert herself in the new school the only way she knew how – through bullying. No wonder nobody liked her... except, strangely enough, the smug clean-cut know-it-all she hated from the first day... and then she didn't notice how she fell under his charm.

Does this work?

>>50798
I like the idea of Keiichi being incredibly smooth and not even knowing it.

Here's an idea I shamelessly stole from a recent Superman/Batman storyline.

The Supermoms have all been captured and their brains uploaded to a virtual reality game! Helplessly watching through the eyes of their own virtual bodies, the Supermoms can only hope the people controlling them in the virtual world can beat the game, or else all is lost! The trick being that each of the Supermoms is being controlled by one of their kids. Shaundra would control Diva, Betsy would control Star-Striker, Alexander (or, perhaps to be funnier, Olivia) would control Sig Rune, Megumi would controll Kaiju, Yolanda would control Tropica, and Harold and Jack would constantly fight for the controller of Mend.

Scenes I had in mind would include Shaundra at first intentionally playing horribly out of spite for her mother, but once she realizes the stakes involved, sobering up and playing the superhero game very well, Betsy being extremely tempted to take Star-Striker's virtual mask off and discover her idol's secret identity once and for all, and Megumi doing cute things with virtual Kaiju.

What do you guys think?

>>50801
I was going to post that in the "All /co/ creations" thread since it contains characters not just from the Supermoms project.

>>50803
The main reason I want something like this is I'm thinking of starting a Supermoms Tumblr. Not much to be posted at first, just character sheets if we can get them, and when actual issues start coming out, the Tumblr will be the repository for the pages.

Is this cool? I need input from others before I do anything.

>>50804

might as well.

>>50804
You will only attract and endless stream of shit if you put it on tumblr.

Then on top of some jackasses screaming "fetish shit" at this, you will then have people doing their retarded "go back to tumblr" shit as well.

It's like giving someone who hates you ammo to shoot at you with.

Hit up http://comiccooperative.wordpress.com/ or something if you need hosting for when you get a comic going, or if you absolutely HAVE to use tumblr, have it be on that artists' tumblr.

>>50806
All right, thanks for the info. Posting comic pages is a long way away, anyway. There are still a lot of characters that need to be designed.

Thread: http://boards.4chan.org/co/thread/62542342

I got banned for a day so I can't bump the thread, hopefully it stays alive until tomorrow night. I had a great response typed up to a post but now I can't post it, so I'll put it here. This is RE: Star-Striker and Kid Striker being captured by The Trapmaster, forced to escape from a fiendish trap, identical to one Star-Striker encountered on her first costumed adventure. Basically, Star-Striker and Kid Striker get out of it by Star-Striker recounting her old adventure (maybe it's something that only Kid Striker can do, due to her smaller size, and Star-Striker guides her through it?) and in the end it was revealed that it wasn't The Trapmaster after all, but Sgt. Star, testing his daughter's mettle and how she works with her new sidekick!



What if that's the first bit of the story, and when Star-Striker discovers it was her dad all along, testing her mettle and the mettle of her new sidekick (with Kid Striker fangirl moment of course), Sgt. Star takes Star-Striker off to the side and says "by the way, your mother and I are going to be in town for a few days" and then we cut to the Banks family having to live with Bev's parents in the Banks household for a few days, with comical scenes playing out, and Beverly trying to keep her retired, superhero parents from going out in costumes and fighting crime.

Ooh! And it could be done as a crossover with Donald Bernstein's parents coming to town. Maybe they and Bev's parents had beef in the old days and the four of them are in town to settle it once and for all. Mend, Star-Striker and Donald all try to stop it (Mend trying to do so without revealing her superheroic alter ego to her parents-in-law) but it turns out it's just the four seniors burying the hatchet or something more benign than a grand fight.

I also had an idea for Airstrike Lass, to suit her name, she doesn't have powers but uses a jetpack to fly around.

>>50818
I'm afraid I don't quite like this idea, for several reasons:

1. Why is Sgt.Star testing Star-Striker? As I posted in the /co/ thread, it would be okay if it happened in the Teen Queens era. But now, she's an experienced 30+ lady, it just seems embarrassing.

2. Iirc, the idea is that Sgt.Star and Airstrike Lass are long retired, and are living in a superhero retirement home. So, he wouldn't run around freely making tests for his daughter. However – I think we could have an issue dedicated to Star-Striker visiting her parents in the retirement home, and getting into some kind of Superfogeys-esque shenanigans (that's a great webcomic, btw – "Superfogeys").

3. Sgt.Star and Airstrike Lass visiting SS is, firstly, improbable since they live in the retirement home (it's more likely for SS to visit them). And secondly, because it's too similar to the Mend storyline. But see what's the problem: with Mend, it works because it plays on the "evil in-laws" stereotype. A visit from the in-laws is the stereotypical fear of any wife – and Mend has even more reasons to fear them! With SS and her parents, well, there's no conflict narrative-wise.

4. I wouldn't advise linking it to the Mend story. The Mend story works well as a self-contained solo issue plot, with Mend and Donald being the main characters and the rest of the Supermoms just helping out from the sidelines.

However, please, don't feel discouraged! First of all, I like the "trapped by Trapmaster – SS tells a story from her youth – it helps them escape" plot. Maybe KS would be the one who sees the connection? Also, as I said earlier, a different plot about SS visiting her parents in the old folks home could also be interesting.
So yeah, my two cents, hope I wasn't too rude

>>50820
As I thought about that idea today I realized it sucked and was too convoluted.

I did have an idea for a Mend solo, however: Mend guest stars on a celebrity cooking show, and is challenged to an impromptu, LIVE bake-off by her arch-nemesis, Phero-Mona, with a random audience member picked as the judge - her own husband, Donald Bernstein! Mend seems to have won, but Phero-Mona utilizes a secret ingredient (Pink Fume) to make Donald quite literally fall in love with her cooking! How can Mend compete with Phero-Mona's cheating ways?

A lewd little story I wrote up while my Internet was down today.

http://plus4chan.org/b/pco/res/151110.html#163270

>>50672
How's the progress coming with the boob chart?

Here's a small preview of a small lewd story I'm writing. Warning: Superheroine in BDSM

>“I’m afraid your teammates are indisposed at the moment and they will fall, just like you will here.” He said as he walked towards the wall, where she saw several instruments of “torture”: a riding crop, a paddle and a cat o’ nine tails. Knowing her husband, he would use them all before the night ended. He grabbed the riding crop, walking behind her and out of sight. “I will break you Anne, oh dear me, I will break you. You will beg for mercy, but I will give you none!” And he hit her across her ass with the crop, hard.

“>Ai!” She chirped while a large red welt formed on her fat bottom. Donald went and whispered to her “Was that too hard sweetheart?” He asked with concern.

>“N-no it’s fine, if I can’t take it I’ll say the safeword.” And she kissed him on the cheek. Spirits lifted, he got into position again and reassumed character.

>“Cry.” He said as he whipped her again. She bit her tongue and prevented herself from making it sound.

>>50845
Keep those in the /pco/ thread: http://plus4chan.org/b/pco/res/151110.html

I think for future /co/ threads we should let it die around Thursday/Friday morning, so we can do a fresh thread on Saturdays.

Old /pco/ died, the new /pco/ thread is here: http://boards.plus4chan.org/pco/t164707.html

you can crossboard link with >>>
>>>/pco/164707

POLL:
http://strawpoll.me/1876675
What should we do with all the Supermoms pics, after removing them from the-/co/nservatory wikia?

I personally like the wikia idea; we could have a different page for each character, and keep all the necessary info there. Then we can shorten our the-/co/nservatory pages to just 1 page, with general project info, a few art, and links.

>>50850
Seconding the wiki idea.

>>50850
>>50851
But on the booru we can also store NSFW art (non-loli/shota)

>>50850
First I'm hearing about any wiki related changes.

I think the project is fine on the wiki as is, just use the already existing /co/ booru for pic dumping.

>>50854
There has been a polite suggestion for us not to dump all the Supermoms pics in the the-conservatory wiki.
So, we're discussing where to dump them!

New thread: http://boards.4chan.org/co/thread/62727660

>>50856
This >>50743 was me.

It just seemed like you guys were adding a bunch of pics, then arguing over which designs were the "canon" ones. I'm still not even sure if you've all decided one which designs are final since you keep changing things as you go.
Now there's something about aliens and familiars? That's getting overly complicated if you ask me.

Canon in this situation is usually whatever gets drawn the most.

>>50860
>It just seemed like you guys were adding a bunch of pics, then arguing over which designs were the "canon" ones.
We just updated a couple characters' designs. After that, there were no redesigns recently.

>Now there's something about aliens and familiars? That's getting overly complicated if you ask me.
Diva's origin was retconned into her being an alien, since it fits her gaudy flashy powers.
Kaiju got a familiar like most magical girls have.

>Canon in this situation is usually whatever gets drawn the most.
We actually usually discuss stuff, and in the most important cases (e.g. costume redesigns) even put up a vote.

Also,
new scripts:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/3tfgmxttv0c39cv/kaiju2.celtx
https://www.dropbox.com/s/qf657kfh9j9klya/kaiju2.html

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zckm01mx7cohq2j/fans_nnnnnnn.html

Thread maker here, I won't be able to make the thread or get on the Internet at all this weekend, so someone else needs to make the thread. I've updated the Pastebins.

Characters that need to be designed/drawn: http://pastebin.com/bi4VZ9eR
Scripts: http://pastebin.com/btsSb21r

No one made a thread?

I was out of town. Let's wait for the next weekend

New thread: http://boards.4chan.org/co/thread/63131773