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No.442013
Protect the PriestessAnonymous
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Richard Matheson has found himself in an alternate universe where the world is ruled by races of lizard-like people called Sarnites. It doesn’t take long but he makes a living for himself in one of the major cities of this Earth. He’s even fallen for a local priestess. But his love takes him on an adventure that will have him facing off against demons, tyrants, and even his past! Protect the Priestess is not just the title of this comic but the goal of our main character. Will he succeed or will the world be plunged into darkness?
No.442014
Anonymous
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>>442013
Sometimes a novel’s worth of backstory and exposition isn’t necessary or even wanted. You’ll learn more about the world and characters as the story progresses but you get the basics from this page.
No.442015
Anonymous
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>>442014
Sometimes you have to sleep with the hot little woman running the inn to pay rent. Poor Richard.
No.442016
Anonymous
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>>442015
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 3
Business before pleasure.
No.442017
Anonymous
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>>442016
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 4
Nothing better than getting a power boost to go with your role as bodyguard.
No.442018
Anonymous
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>>442017
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 5
Wow, is everyone in this world half-naked? Yes. Sometimes more naked than that.
No.442019
Anonymous
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>>442018
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 6
Where does Alys store all her magic? I can think of one specific area.
No.442021
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>>442019
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 7
Better hurry up before Sloa tries to tag along. That’d be a mood killer.
No.442022
Anonymous
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>>442021
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 8
I don’t know why but it’s hard to pay attention to what they’re saying.
No.442023
Anonymous
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>>442022
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 9
Time for a picnic! Just watch out for bears. They think they’re so smart.
No.442026
Anonymous
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>>442021
Is this a racism?
No.442036
Anonymous
>>442026
No, he's just overprotective.
No.442037
Anonymous
Replies:>>442038
Not busting your balls or nothing but wouldn't you rather be storytiming this in /pco/?
I mean when the comic begins with every female character's first on-panel encounter with the protagonist having them talking about how much they want to fuck him or how much they enjoyed fucking him in the past and the ad-bars on the bottom showing fucking it seems to be a comic that will involve alot of porn.
No.442038
Anonymous
Replies:>>442039
>>442037
It has fanservice but no straight up nudity. No nipples, no genitals. No on panel sex although there will be implied stuff.
No.442039
Anonymous
>>442038
That seems something of a waste considering the dialogue is just
>SEX
from the start.
No.442042
Anonymous
Replies:>>442043
The page for that comic is very similar to the Deviants one in /pco/ so I'm gonna ask, are you the same guy?
No.442043
Anonymous
Replies:>>442054
>>442042
Yup!
No.442044
Anonymous
Replies:>>442052
Being honest in responding with my critique, this seems like a bad comic from the beginning.
The art is nice, but the concept and writing are pretty sub-par.

Right away your 'hero' is bland isekai guy with superpowers who has ended up in scalie world and just gone around banging their ladies left and right and is only stopping in banging them all so he can bang a specific one (and will get even more superpowers as a benefit).
Like on page two right after the hastily crammed-in backstory (which is a terrible way to intro your world to the reader) you've already got a lizard-milf desperate for another ride on his dick, this is porno scripting which the characters designs back up with all of these furaffinty anime-haired lizard-lady OCs, their hefty jugs and cleavage on display.

Its just all comes across as fanfic or light novel level of writing with nothing of substance worth actually sticking around for.
If it was an actual porn comic would at least make sense since an important thing would be getting to the steamy Action ASAP, and sex scenes with the pleasing art and brightly colored big-titty reptiles would be a logical draw.

As-is its just going to be a bunch of cliches with teenage wish-fulfilment MC here being some lame shonen/isekai protagonist, maybe off-panel banging a bunch of other chicks (up to and including the villainess or her big-titty female sub-bosses) on the way to rescuing his priestess girlfriend due to wacky hijinx.

Either stick to the likes of Deviants or if you want to focus on telling a story without it being pornographic (which seems like an odd choice, there's nothing stopping you from having full nudity AND a well-written plot) then really think about how to achieve quality writing and character-building.
Its shaping up to be just another forgettable deviantart comic and that's a shame.
No.442052
Anonymous
>>442044
Thanks for the feedback!
No.442054
Anonymous
Replies:>>442089
>>442043
ok, in that case, there's something I've got to ask. It looks like you just commission artists to draw your comics, and I'm assuming you make income from having a patreon for each comic. Is this financially viable? Like, is it something one can do to get their own comics drawn without getting massively in the red from the price of the art?
No.442089
Anonymous
>>442054
I've spent years building up the Sexyverse brand from nothing and it has cost me thousands of dollars and even then I will say that I don't make that much money because I use almost all the money to commission more. What I do make my money from is Sexyverse Games. People are more willing to give money for games than comics.

In hindsight, I wish I just stuck to trying to draw my comics and doing simplistic comics. Would've been a slower crawl but I would've saved all that money and likely have become more self-sufficient.

But I've seen great artists and writers not succeed because they don't give what a lot of people want. There's also marketing, catering, and shilling. The third pillar of a successful comic. The fourth pillar is luck.
No.442276
Anonymous
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>>442089
Shouldn't the story of how he got into another universe, how he was received, and how he fell in love, plus where he has superpowers, begin?
No.442294
Anonymous
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>>442276
Not necessarily. All that stuff will get explained over time when it becomes relevant. But the upcoming conflict isn't about that.
No.442298
Anonymous
>>442294
But the problem is no one cares about your Main Character, the one the story is about.
He's just lame superpowered shirtless coolguy from another world dropped into a fantasy one that fucks ALL the bitches.
No.442305
Anonymous
Replies:>>442308
>>442089
OK, so it's not a viable way of realising your own comics, it just offloads some of the cost, and one would still need a lot of money in advance to get the thing going. Got it.
No.442308
Anonymous
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>>442305
It ultimately depends. For me, I could probably be more profitable on the comics side but I keep putting more money into creating more content when I could just stop at a certain point and watch as the numbers grow. I think that at the very least you can do good with a weekly updating comic and some Patreon incentives. The big problem with comics is that there's a lot of competition and most people that enjoy it are less likely to shell out money compared to other things. You really have to work on getting people invested in it to the point that they want to give you money to support it. And that takes time.
>>442013
There are still such never ending boring webcomics around? I thought they died out by the 2010s or so.
Anime style art check, quasi-anthro princess with giant boobs, check, mecha design stolen from Gundam, check, boring protagonist nobody cares about, check...
Let me guess, even without reading the rest I can tell the story, he is an everyday nerd who suddenly finds himself in some fantasy universe where he is the prophecised saviour and all the girls throw themselves at him?
No.442329
Anonymous
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>>442089
You're going to do a Sexyverse crossover with Protect the Priestess ?
If you want to be financially supported, advertise and accept payments outside of PayPal and Patreon or Gumroad and donate to ko-fi and behance or something similar.
>>442308 He physically sells the print.
No.442330
Anonymous
>>442329
No but I am able to use my website and social media accounts to help boost exposure. Aside from that I have accounts for the comic. It takes time but it’s building up steadily.
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>>442023
I'll spoiler this since it gets a little lewd. But as you can see from the previews things kind of get derailed.
No.442426
Anonymous
>>442425
But why?
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Anonymous
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>>442425
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 11
Cockblocked by danger!
No.443054
Anonymous
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>>443053
Improper use of chibis

Being a tease and not even showing us her naples
No.443153
Anonymous
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>>443053
Protect the Priestess Chapter 1 Page 12
Oh, she’s bad alright! If you know what I mean!
>>443054
:(
No.443154
Anonymous
>>443153
>That eye flash
>The characters randomly being chibis
>This whole thing being an Isekai
Honestly this whole comic seems confused on if it wants to be some parody of anime or just the most generic cliche animu webcomic possible.